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# Writing System

Orwell's six writing rules (1946) as an always-on prose standard for docs, PR text, commit messages, reports, and copy, plus a /rewrite command that applies them to existing text. Governs prose only, never code or technical terms.

- Category: patterns
- Status: stable
- Tags: writing, prose, style, communication, orwell
- Dependencies: none
- Presets: full, standard, team
- Context cost: ~775 tokens (always-loaded rule files)
- Last updated: 2026-08-04T09:16:14-04:00
- Available as a native plugin marketplace entry

## README

# writing-system

Orwell's six writing rules (1946) as an always-on prose standard, plus a `/rewrite` command that applies them to existing text.

## What It Does

Most setups ban AI-sounding words one at a time ("no delve", "no em dashes") and still ship every README and PR description in the same AI voice. The missing piece is a writing system, not a longer blacklist. This module installs one:

- **`rules/writing-system.md`** loads in every session and governs prose: docs, READMEs, PR descriptions, commit messages, issue comments, session reports, chat responses, marketing copy. The six rules:
  1. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
  2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
  3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
  4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
  5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
  6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
- The rule adds two workflow subsections: commit/PR prose (plain words, no achievement language, one-read test) and session reports (plain sentences, no emoji checkmarks, no "Successfully").
- **`commands/rewrite.md`** adds `/rewrite [file] [mode:landing] [--apply]`: lists every violation (stale phrase, long word with its short replacement, cuttable word, passive construction, jargon), then rewrites, keeping every fact, number, and name unchanged. `mode:landing` adds the swap test for marketing copy: if a competitor could paste the line unchanged onto their page, rewrite or delete it.

The rules never touch code, identifiers, API names, or technical terms whose plain-word swap would change the meaning.

## Relationship to editorial-critique

`/editorial-critique` is the deep review: 8 parallel lenses over long-form writing. `/rewrite` is the cheap pass: one read, one violations list, one rewrite. The rule file is the standard both work from.

## Manual Installation

```bash
# Global (all projects)
mkdir -p ~/.claude/rules ~/.claude/commands
cp rules/writing-system.md ~/.claude/rules/writing-system.md
cp commands/rewrite.md ~/.claude/commands/rewrite.md
```

## Files

| File | Description |
|------|-------------|
| `rules/writing-system.md` | The six rules, scope carve-outs, commit/PR and report subsections |
| `commands/rewrite.md` | `/rewrite`: violations list, then rewrite; `mode:landing` for copy |


## Files

### rule

#### rules/writing-system.md

```
# Writing System

**Iron Law:** PROSE FOLLOWS THE SIX RULES. FIX THE SYSTEM, NOT ONE WORD AT A TIME.

These rules govern prose: docs, READMEs, PR descriptions, commit messages, issue comments, session reports, chat responses, marketing copy. They never touch code, identifiers, API names, error strings someone will grep for, or a technical term whose plain-word swap would change the meaning ("idempotent" stays "idempotent").

## The Six Rules (Orwell, 1946)

1. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

Check deliverable prose (a README, a PR body, a doc page, a report) against these rules before delivering it.

## What the Rules Do to a Sentence

Before: "Comprehensive error handling has been implemented across all API endpoints to ensure robust and reliable performance."

After: "We added error handling to every API endpoint."

Comprehensive, robust, reliable, and ensure are gone. Passive turned active. 16 words down to 8. Same facts.

## Commit Messages and PR Descriptions

State what changed and why in plain words. No achievement language: no "comprehensive", no "robust", no "seamless". A reviewer should know what the change does in one read. Value-first structure (what the change enables, then the evidence) comes from the git-workflow rules and the `pr-description` skill; these rules govern the words inside that structure.

## Session Reports and Summaries

Report progress in plain sentences: what changed, what failed, what comes next. No emoji checkmarks, no "Successfully", no "Perfect", no wall of bullets. Start with three lines; add detail only when it changes the reader's next action.

This governs free-form summaries. When a command or skill mandates an exact output format (a JSON envelope, `/sds`'s final report, a statusline, a structured findings artifact), that format wins.

## Why There Is No Word Blacklist

Banning words one at a time ("no delve", "no em dashes") treats symptoms. The six rules are the system; a banned-word list is what you fall back on without one. For a deep, line-by-line review of long-form writing, run `/editorial-critique`; its detectors (AI-tell vocabulary, filler phrases) apply these rules at review time. For a quick single pass over existing text, run `/rewrite`.

## Red Flags

Stop and rewrite if you catch yourself:

- Writing "comprehensive", "robust", "seamless", or "cutting-edge" in prose
- Opening a report with an emoji checkmark or the word "Successfully"
- Writing a sentence whose subject performs no action ("error handling has been implemented")
- Padding a summary with bullets that restate the diff
- Swapping a precise technical term for a folksy one and losing the meaning; rule 6 exists for this

```

### command

#### commands/rewrite.md

```
---
description: Rewrite prose under the six writing rules - list every violation first, then rewrite, keeping every fact, number, and name unchanged
allowed-tools: Read, Edit, Glob, Grep, AskUserQuestion
argument-hint: "[file-path or pasted text] [mode:landing] [--apply]"
---

# /rewrite - Apply the Six Writing Rules

Single-pass rewrite of existing prose under the six writing rules in `~/.claude/rules/writing-system.md`. Violations first, then the rewrite. Facts, numbers, and names survive untouched.

For a deep multi-lens review (argument, structure, data, impact), use `/editorial-critique` instead. This command is the cheap pass: one read, one list, one rewrite.

## Step 1: Resolve the Target

- If `$ARGUMENTS` contains a file path, Read it. Critique the prose only: skip frontmatter, fenced code blocks, inline code, and command output.
- If `$ARGUMENTS` contains pasted text, use it directly.
- If neither, ask what to rewrite.

Parse flags from `$ARGUMENTS` before treating the rest as the target: `mode:landing` and `--apply`.

## Step 2: List Every Violation

Go through the text and list each violation, grouped by rule, quoting the exact original text:

1. **Stale figures of speech** (rule 1): each print-worn metaphor or simile, with a fresh or literal replacement.
2. **Long words** (rule 2): each long word with its short replacement ("utilize" -> "use", "approximately" -> "about").
3. **Cuttable words** (rule 3): each word or phrase that can go without losing meaning ("in order to" -> "to", "it's worth noting that" -> cut).
4. **Passive constructions** (rule 4): each passive with its active rewrite, where the actor is known.
5. **Jargon** (rule 5): each jargon or foreign phrase with an everyday equivalent, only where precision survives the swap. A technical term with no accurate plain substitute stays.

If a category has no violations, skip it. Do not pad the list.

## Step 3: Rewrite

Produce the full rewrite applying every fix from Step 2.

Hard constraints:

- Keep every fact, number, and name unchanged.
- Keep code blocks, identifiers, commands, links, and frontmatter byte-for-byte.
- Keep the document's structure (headings, lists, tables) unless a violation lives in the structure itself.
- Rule 6 wins conflicts: if a fix makes the sentence worse, leave the original and say so.

Output the rewrite in a fenced code block so it pastes clean (see `copy-paste-output.md`).

## Step 4: mode:landing

For marketing or landing-page copy, add two checks on top of Steps 2-3:

- **One concrete claim per line.** Flag any line that makes two claims or none.
- **The swap test.** For every line, ask: could a competitor paste this unchanged onto their page? If yes, the line says nothing about this product. Rewrite it around a concrete, specific claim, or delete it.

List swap-test failures in Step 2's output as their own group.

## Step 5: Apply

- If the target was a file and `--apply` was passed, apply the rewrite with Edit.
- If the target was a file without `--apply`, show the violations and rewrite, then ask whether to apply.
- If the target was pasted text, the fenced rewrite is the deliverable; there is nothing to apply.

```